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I’ve was waiting for my head to produce something less vicious when;
he said look at you now, you’re past the point where words can make do.
I nod in agreement. (Except I think living like you do is a kind of abasement.)

I’ve been tired of rhyme schemes and sought a replacement
for the broken reality books could no longer improve.
He said: I’ll wait for your head to produce something less arrogant.

Churning waters create mile high waves that swallow me by accident,
and leave a gaping crevice over which even he can’t move,
he patiently climbs (I think living like I do is a kind of abasement)

down into the sinking source of my constant frustration-
reminds me- baby we’re young, I don’t know the world any better than you,
I can help you sit and wait patiently for your head to work again.

Surrounded, drowning and mute I ask them what we’ve been chasing,
defer to these sunken-eyed Gods I don’t believe in anew
and laboriously find that living like they do is just self-immolation.

He holds me in his arms and says baby you need to stop wasting
away in your lies, your fantasies and suicidal plans that always fall through-
I’ll be here waiting for your head to produce something less vicious when
you finally decide that living like this is a kind of abasement.
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Marty
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Canada
Hello, my name is Marty and i live in Canada. I dabble in just about everything, from photography to writing to slapping coconuts on walls. What sort you may ask? the kind that an African swallow can carry.
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2015
Hapy birthday man!
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner May 30, 2015
Thank you for the favorites!
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
Thank you for the favorites!
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014
Happy birthday!
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sellenimonie Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Student
I FEEL SOOOO OLD
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
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nawkaman Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014
thank you for the fave, marty! :)
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Thank you for the favorite!
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scheherazades Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thanks for the fave, and i hope you have a good day!~
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hello,
thank you kindly for the fave
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